I Need Opinions

[lilfishie]

I need some opinions on how to make this drawing better, so came to the people that know bettas best, it doesn't look right to me but i can't figure out why

 

[modaz]

well he looks ok to me, maybe take away the finrot look to his anal fin though apart from that the proportions look fine and on-one can say what a nice guppy that is as its defo a bettas, a splash of colour would be good.

 

[ibbledibble]

looks pretty good, but maybe try narrowing the body a little more towards where it meets the tail

 

[lilfishie]

Thanks for the comments, will now go and edit it, or may just do another one with a narrower body and colour

 

[newfishy]

it looks a wee bit like a combtail or a raggy vt, if you smoothed out the edges and thinned the body out like bibble sugested it would be near perfect, when it very pretty already.