My Website

[jakeroberts]

hi i am 12 years old and i was soooo bored so guess wat everyone i have been making a website and it is ready to be seen its not quit finished but i think it looks good it is supose to help beginners thanks for looking heres the link Fishlovers if you find any information that is not right plz tell me as i am still editing it and if you have anything you reckon i should add tell me.

 

[mark.w.jones]

Very Impressive young man. I wish I had half of your website editing ability. I can just about build a rather shaky looking website in Frontpage. Keep adding to and improving it and keep up your enthusiasm

Recommendations:

1. There's a number of spelling errors need looking at.
2. I would add TFF to your weblinks.
3. You fish food section could do with a bit more detail and description of the foods listed.

 

[Esfa]

Wow, impressive.

There are a few spelling errors though, and it would also be useful to put the Minimum tank size in gallons and litres

 

[MojoDex]

very nice!

maybe you could talk to a few ppl on here and get more fish profiles up?

 

[kewskills]

excellent start dude

 

[rdd1952]

Very nice start. Maybe I should get you to design my real estate website.

 

[paul_219]

Very nice tank. Impressive job.

 

[iairj84]

Very nice start! Other than the spelling errors a lot of the stuff seems pretty spot on!

Although I've never seen a guppy that's 45 cm's across

 

[jakeroberts]

With this website i actually started with a tenplate and then added all my writing and pictures and it was all free so that was pretty good . thanks for all the nice comments and i know there were a couple of spelling mistakes . also if any of you people know some fish that you would like in the fish species just send me a picture and i will get the information and if any of yous have any tank picture you want in the gallery just send them with your name

 

[timmystood]

Looks good! Some grammer and spelling errors on the mainpage in particular but that can be easily changed!

Great start

 

[K.J.]

Great job, but you need to do these spellchecks:

Welcome to fishlovers. On this site you will be able to find very helpful information about how to care for your fish and their aquarium. As this site is new it will continually grow with more and more information that will help you look after your fish. Some of the information you will find on this site will include information about different species of fish, aquarium plants, different diseases and just overall general facts about fish.

 

[kribensis12]

Great start! I am around your age and dont want to pay for a website, but when i get a job, i will post the website on here so u guys can see it! You might want to devote each page to a fish, becasue you really arnt getting enough detail, like if it is a cichlid, is it peacful?, how often do they breed, do they breed in captivity, and you might also want to add more detailed desriptions on everything else.Good job.

 

[Bozza]

Looks good. Will keep going back and checking whats new to the site. Good job mate

 

[Maximus]

Great start! I am around your age and dont want to pay for a website, but when i get a job, i will post the website on here so u guys can see it! You might want to devote each page to a fish, becasue you really arnt getting enough detail, like if it is a cichlid, is it peacful?, how often do they breed, do they breed in captivity, and you might also want to add more detailed desriptions on everything else.Good job.

Your profile says your 44!


Great site by the way, hope you take all of this as
positive feedback, to help make it better

 

[jakeroberts]

hello all i was wandering if any one wanted a profile of a fish that they have on the website just send me a picture and the name of the fish also if any one has any pictures of there tank that i could use in the gallery just send them with a short descripyoin of the tank it would be appreciated