Will you

[GSD]

http/www.freewebs.com/livebearerworld/index.htm

have a look and tell me what you think and how to improve it!

 

[OohFeeshy]

Well.. First of all you spelt livebearers wrong in the banner at the top. And then in the dyed fish bit you repeated the same large chunk of text twice. Start by sorting tht out, then somone else will tell you more

 

[GSD]

ta erm livebearers was already taken so i had to have that

 

[purple_drazi]

Good effort! If I could suggest...it might be an idea to check your spelling. It looks more professional when there aren't a bunch of spelling mistakes.

 

[SirMinion]

Hey, that's really good!
Nice, simple and easy to follow layout. I like it.

The only thing I think it needs is smaller text.

The text on this page:

http/www.freewebs.com/livebearerworld/li...rerbreeding.htm
is about right but on the home page and several others, the text is massive!

Also, as other people have mentioned, it needs to be proof read!

 

[SirMinion]

ta erm livebearers was already taken so i had to have that

He means you have written 'Livebarer' instead of 'Livebearer'

 

[WILDER]

Sirminion your avator makes me laugh,it's really good, and you have one of my platy's in the pictures the orange one.

 

[GSD]

ive changed the double posts
the site is only half finished ive got loads more to do!
im changing the fonts!

 

[SirMinion]

ive changed the double posts

Now do the spelling and the huge text.

Also I notice that your links aren't links, they're just underlined.

(Wilder:Orange Platy? where?)

 

[WILDER]

The eight picture on livebearers.

 

[GSD]

r u talkin about the pics?if one of them is your pic im really sorry but i found them on google

 

[WILDER]

Just that it's exactly the same as one of my platys, nothing to worry about.