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[clover]

yesterday i did add my new website but the post just went with out a trace did someone remove it?
anyways here is my new website any feed back is welcomed
dont be to harsh tho lololol
cheers
http/www.freewebs.com/bestbettas/

 

[Gill]

I can't think what Happened.

1 minute I was reading your post and replyed, then went back in to chaeck if you saw my comment. and Whoosh no trace of the thread, Nothing came up in the Search option either.

Did you manage to see my Feedaback though b4 it was deleted.

Typo on the Stock Shop
"You can pay me by Postal Orders, Cash, Cheque, or Bank Transpire "

 

[The-Wolf]

just like to piont out this
"betta's will be sold cheep"
that should read "cheap", as cheep is a noise made by a bird

 

[clover]

oooops a daisy lol thanks for pointin em out
nah gill didnt gt to see it but thanks will go and do them now

 

[@ombomb]

Betta's should be Bettas, unless you are talking about something that your Betta owns, or shortening "Betta is".

 

[mlee0332]

In one sentence you started it "if you have..." rather than "If you have..." And also ill needs to be I'll.

On the page where you are listing the bettas for sale, you put "please email me the code my the betta(s) you want" instead of by the betta

HTH

Good job!