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looking good dan, youve kept the book plan and ran with it for ages now, i really lookforward to seing how it comes out
id very much like to help as much as i can,
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looks better, still room for improvement though IMO, I'd put a profile on like you did for the goby and put the profile first, then the block of text wouldn't be so intimidating and people who just wanted the basics wouldn't have to trawl through text if they don't want to.