A Little Poem To Make Me Think!

Joviella

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He made me feel happy,he made me feel good.
He said he loved me,like no-one else could.
I can't forget him,try as I might,
He made me feel too special,both day and night.
I remember his smile,I remember his kiss.
So much to remember,too much to miss.
I remember all the things he said,
the words are all there in my head.
To never see his face again,
leaves my heart in constant pain.
No calls,no texts,leaves words unspoken,
I hurt inside,think my heart is broken.....
By day I'm unhappy,at night I cry,
He didn't even say Goodbye!
He said to remember,to never forget....
I even remember the first time we met.
It was a long time ago,almost twenty years,
alot of the memories leave me in tears.
I think about him all the time,
I fell in love!Is that a crime?
When we were together,nothing else mattered.
Now I'm without him,my heart is shattered.
I told him my feelings,I gave him my heart
I thought it was forever,but now we're apart!
I will remember!
I will forget,never,
I promised I would love him forever!


To the man that I have lost,
I want you,whatever the cost!
You make me smile,you changed my life!
You make me want to be your wife!!!!!!!
 
:-( What a sad poem. Did you write it ?
 
Hey! Nice one there. It has a good flow to it, great job! :thumbs:

You have more guts than me, I have been humming and harring about whether to post some of my stuff on here or not. Up until present I've been too chicken :lol: I've posted some stuff on other forums before, but they were all writing forums filled with enough writing to keep the spotlight off myself, a little different to the glaring openess of a fish based forum hahaha
 

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